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Ranjit Singh Sra SAYS..............bahut sohni kahani hai,,majboori ki kujh karvaundi hai,,
The protagonist-narrator’s name (Dev/Dave) and his profession confirm the autobiographical genesis of the story. It is interesting – so far as an unambiguous portrayal of hypocrisy goes. The element of guilt (in this case a collateral of hypocrisy) – adds to the narrative’s attraction. Yet, several questions arise. Often, as is the case in this story, women sex workers are shown as being in the profession out of compulsion – economic or otherwise. But, if we look at emancipated women there are several cases where rich and empowered women have used their charms to get whatever they want – be it a contract or favorable business deal or similar other lucrative quid pro quos. My point is, if one feels guilty of having paid sex with a woman how would those rich women be feeling for using their money and power to have sex with male prostitutes, aka, gigolos? Davinder, you are a talented story teller. Try your hand on realism rather than such pseudo-idealism.
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